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PostSubject: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:49 pm

Name:Jikūkan Ninjutsu
Requirements:Fuuninjutsu, 2 Style point Reduction, My Permission. Taken at character creation or getting Trained by someone who knows it.
Description:Jikūkan Ninjutsu (Literally meaning "Space-time Technique") are techniques that allow the users to manipulate the space-time continuum. By manipulating a specific point of space, the user can warp anything targeted into a dimensional void, and teleport it to another location near instantaneously through the use of seals. Often seen in summoning technique, but in terms of Jikūkan, Jikūkan can make someone else travel so long as the necessary seals are in the given areas. More chakra is consumed if larger objects are teleported. This is often compared to the Body Flicker technique, though it does not increase speed, just rather teleport things at certain pace thanks to system of seals one would incorporate in the teleportation. The size of the seal can also affect what gets teleported and how much, but that only drains more of the chakra of the user. To use Jikūkan, the user must place one seal in a desired area, and one to send the user to the desired area. Since Jikūkan requires mastery of Fuuninjutsu, the user can place two way seals, so one can teleport back and forth with the same two seals. With the case of multiple seals, if the user adds a little more chakra into the Jikūkan, they can teleport to a desired location, rather then have Point A, B and C, want to go to B, but end up at C, or can use seperate seals with individual traits. However, if that is the case and one seal is destroyed, the other becomes useless until a new one with the same markings is made. A seal can be broken only if the surface its on is destroyed. To activate a seal, so long as it is in range with another, the seal creator must activate it with there chakra and their chakra only, and depending on rank, the seal can be activated quicker or slower. After a seal has been activated, it activates all of the seals with the same markings and formations for one use, and the more seals activated that share markings, the more chakra that's being used. The seals must as well be equivalent with either the length, width or height of whats being teleported, so unlike The flying thunder god technique which was derived from Jikūkan which can send a ninja far from the small seal on a kunai, the seal the must be proportionate to what its sending and receiving. You can only place seals on willing humans though, such as allies/yourself. It also powers up your Fuuninjutsu, so you can use fuuninjutsu as if you were one level higher.

E Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 5 yards. Takes three seconds for the seal to activate.
D Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 7 yards, couch size/two humans 5 yards. Takes 3 seconds for seal to activate for standard human size, 5 seconds for couch size.
C Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 10 yards, two humans 7 yards, Takes 2.5 seconds for seal to activate for human size, 4.5 seconds for two humans.
B Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 15 yards, two humans 10 yards, three humans 4 yards. Takes 2 seconds for seal to activate for human size, 3.5 seconds for two humans, 5 seconds for three humans.
A Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 20 yards, two humans 12.5 yards, three humans 7 yards, four humans five yards. Takes 1.5 seconds for seal to activate for human size, 3 for two humans, 4 for three humans, 5.5 for four humans..
S Rank - Can teleport that of a human size 30 yards, two humans 17.5 yards, three humans 12.5 yards, four humans 10 yards, five humans 7.5 yards. It takes one second for the seal to activate for human size, 2.5 for two humans, 3 for three humans, 4 for four humans, 5 for five humans.

Abilities
Jikūkan Seal Placement
- A technique in which the user applies chakra through bodily limbs, mainly the hands, to create seals for the Jikūkan technique on a desired surface. The bigger the seal created the more chakra it requires, though it doesn't require much. It more so requires chakra for activation, rather then creation. These seals are significant in size and appearance, compared to more common seals. There can be multiple Jikūkan seals on the battlefield at once, all that is required is that they are created. This technique is near instant, but it can change in terms of time if a big enough seal is made.

Jikūkan Seal Release
- A technique in which the creator of a Jikūkan seal uses to destroy their seal. This can be useful if they are moving to a new fighting area, for it gives them back some of the chakra they used for their seals and allows them to recreate some with the same markings. This can also be helpful if wanting to draw the remaining chakra of broken Jikūkan seal. The technique was developed so the seal placer could keep placing seals wherever the fight went.


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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:15 pm

Seeing as how this is something a Fuuinjutsu user must be able to learn, this highly restricts others from being able to take and abuse this.

The penalties are reasonable as well. What do you think, partner?
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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:21 pm

I'm alright with this, keep in mind we have a stated rule saying not time/space manipulation, but thats just to avoid Flying Thunder God and such, which will never be approved.

I'll Approve this.
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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:22 pm

Revoked, upon reviewing the profile of the character I realized we both have a misunderstanding.

Fuuinjutsu is a single point to learn, their isn't a mastery system for it. As such that leave the user with too many combat advantages with teleportation. If you want it to return to the way it was a line as simple as

"Having this ability allows users to use Fuuinjutsu techniques as though they were one-rank higher, but this also affects other styles, permanently removing 2 style points."

Sorry, I had never made a Fuuin user on this system.
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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:28 pm

Going to comment as I know how to make this perfect in all senses. If you make it so you can only place seals upon willing people, then it prevents the possible abuse of teleporting an enemy mid fight, and only works on allies/yourself etc. Which would make it much better, and still give you the same desired effect upon yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:32 pm

Edited, I made it remove two points, power up fuuninjutsu, made it so you can get it from character creation or be taught it from some one who knows it and made it so you can only use it on willing humans.
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PostSubject: Re: Jikūkan   Jikūkan Icon_minitime1Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:04 pm

Then Re-approved
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