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PostSubject: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:29 am

Name: Finn Adventure
Alias: The Little Hero
Age: 6
Gender: Male
Height: 4’01
Weight: 78lbs

Appearance:
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Race: Caucasian
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Goldenrod
Body: Little
Ethnicity: Ame no Kuni

Personality: Finn is a brave little boy, who would do anything to help out someone. Although he is only 6, he has a very big heart and can’t wait to experience the world. He is a bit stubborn at times, and though most call him “cute” he is a very sweet boy indeed.

Being a "little Hero" Finn is up for any task, no matter how small or how large. Of course though, he is only 6 so of course hes not ognna do something like fight the 9 tailed fox head on, he would most likely cry at that, but the point is Finn is brave for his age. He is always up for adventure and loves to meet new people and make new friends. Unlike most his age, Finn wont hide behind someone and point and stare, rather, Finn would more likely go investigate than sit and hide.



Village: Kirigakure
Title: Genin
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Missing Ninja Class:

    Karma:0
    Alignment:True Neutral
    Renown: 0

Rank: E
Experience Points: 0
Bloodline:N/A
Element: Suiton
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu Master, Taijutsu Secondary
Sub Fighting style:
Inventory:

  • A Big Leaf
  • Plastic Sword
  • Strange Rusty Blade




Kekkai Genkai:
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Combat Styles:
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Bloodline Limits:N/A

Jutsu Total:

    Basics: All
    E Rank: 0
    D Rank: 0
    C Rank: 0
    B Rank: 0
    A Rank: 0
    S Rank: 0

Jutsus:

Basic Jutsu
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Suiton Ninjutsu
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Non Elemental Ninjutsu
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TaiJutsu
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Background: Finn is a very young boy, and as such he hasn’t experienced much. However, when Finn was born, it was a bit of a tragic story. His mother, A very kind women, had sadly died giving birth to him, and his father, out of pure sorrow and loneliness ended his own life leaving Finn all alone at a very young age. He was only around 3 months old when his father died, so he doesn’t remember either of them at all. He was raised by a very kind girl named Minato who still sees him from time to time to check up on him. Normally, Finn is seen by the ocean as he has a very deep and misunderstood connection with it. It seems that whenever he is around water, Finn always gets more calm, and his eyes turn a deep blue. However, this is the magic of Finn.

One night while playing on the Beach, Finn decided to go for a swim. He willed his way into the water, fearlessly, and submerged. Surprised being able to see, he could also breath underwater and as such Finn is a very successful swimmer. He was able to move his body to do amazing thing with it, even being able to combine himself with the very ocean itself. While under the sea that night, Finn found a very strange object. It was a small rusted sword that had the word's "Poseidon’s Anguish" on the side. He kept the blade, hopefully being able to make it useful one day. Ever since that day, Finn has always been seen around the water, and doesn’t go anywhere without that little blade.

Aside from this, however, Finn has been known to be a very skilled shinobi at his young age. Although he is only 6, he has already graduated from the Ninja academy, learning all the basics and earning himself the title of Genin. When he was in the academy however, surprisingley, no one made fun of Finn for his young age, however, he did seem to remain alone, and although he tried, he didnt make very many friends. Now, though, Finn travels around the village of Kiri, with not a worry in his mind, or a care in the world. The life of Finn, is a sweet one.


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PostSubject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:31 am

Profiles Fine, is the blade approved?

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PostSubject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:52 pm

The blade hasn't been applied for and there are a couple of discrepancies in this profile I must address:

1) I know it's cute and all, but could you please change the subject heading of this thread to the character's actual name? You can place sayings and whatnot in the description box below the title subject.

2) I would like to know how he became a Genin at 6 years old. Unless otherwise stated in your background, I don't see it likely that Finn is on par in skills with Itachi. And since I'm to assume that because there are no jutsu listed for him - not even the basics - that he has not even attended the Academy yet.

Fix these changes and I'll be happy to look over this again.

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PostSubject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:08 pm

Editted, and the blade, as of now, is nothing more than a rusty old katana blade, but with some plot, along with a time skip to make him around 17, you will come to find out what he makes of the blade and Ill apply for it then.
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PostSubject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:45 pm

All right, well I don't see anything wrong with this profile. Though I hope that he doesn't get into a tussle with any other Genin in any other village. XD

What do you think, partner?

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PostSubject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy   Wed Aug 25, 2010 5:39 pm

Solid, interesting character, look forward to seeing the RP

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